Wednesday, 3 December 2014

Gloop

Today we made gloop from cornflour and water. Then we talked about what happened. When we wrote about the gloop we used adjectives and similies. 

We would like to share some of our writing with you. 


The Crumbly Gloop
The crumbly gloop is like zombie skin and it is like green rain if you flip it over. It felt hard and soft.   Louis


The Green Gloop
The gloop was sticky and this is how you make it. You put powder in first, then green water. Then you crunch it up and then it goes crumbly. Next, you put more water so it will be gloopy. And then you have to wash your hands and you sit by Room 31. It looks like green water.    Chelsea


The gloop looks like green rain.   Grayson


The gloop looked like zombie skin.   Ciaan


I looked at the gloop and it felt soggy because it had water in it.        Hayden


The gloop looked like a snail's gloop melting.   Jordan


Gloop is like green snail's slime. It looks like green rain. It feels like icecream.      Emily M.


Gloopy Maloopy
The gloop was slimy like trashpack slime. Do you think that it's yucky? It looks like a waterfall.   Rafferty


The gloop drips from my hands and it looks like zombie skin.   Mackenzie


Gloop
Green rain is gloop. It looks like green slime and if feels like hard rain dripping from my fingers.    Alex


Squishy Gloop
We made gloop. The gloop is like zombie skin. It felt hard. It is green. We made it with green water and powder. It dripped from my fingers.   Kyan


Green Gloop
The gloop is green and it is dripping from my hands. It looks like green glue and it looks like icecream dripping. We did it at school. It feels like soft glue.  Tayla


The Green Gloop
When I touch the gloop it was sticky for me. When I clapped it off my hands it went off. It was yucky for me. It was green and it was sticky.    Brooke


Gloop Melting From My Hands
The gloop is looking like melted snail shell. It felt slimy. It was yucky.   Chad



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